Sun Day

The darkness has lifted

The clouds are gone

The sun is shining brightly

And trees are dancing wildly

Moving in tandem with the rhythm

Of the wind;

The birds are chirping

Tweeting sweet words to each other

As they move in circles in the sky

Flapping their wings and being merry;

The air is warm

The heart is light

And free

It is a Sun-Day.

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17 Comments Add yours

  1. Adeleke Julianah says:

    Sun-Day…Sunny-Day…better days ahead!
    Nice one Doc!
    Wanted to comment since, but the god of internet refused…

    1. topazo says:

      Thanks for taking the pain to comment Jules, and shaming the gods of the internet.

      1. Adeleke Julianah says:

        Lols!!! They never know they can’t win against determined me! Hehehehe!!!!

  2. amity4 says:

    Sun-day is like morphine
    Relieving pain
    but not without a pay.
    Don’t get addicted dear
    It might leave you breathless.
    Be mindful of sun- set
    For mr gloomy might sneak in with mr dark night.

    1. Adeleke Julianah says:

      Wow!!! That’s some observation lady Amity!

    2. topazo says:

      Lol…nice real nice
      Nevertheless, we will enjoy the sun and the warmth
      Live in the moment
      Spare no thought for what comes next
      Whatever it is, we will survive
      And live life to the fullest
      No fear, no regrets

      1. amity4 says:

        Before i say good night. Still in the spirit of sun-day…
        …when you get to published that international award winning book ,
        Never you forget your Z channel fans.
        You are amazing.
        Never stop writing.

        1. topazo says:

          Awwww…thanks dear!
          If I ever write that international award winning book, it will be because of you guys here on Z channel…you guys are the best!

  3. zikaolofin says:

    Nice, merry, sunny poem

    1. topazo says:

      Thanks Zee..where have you been?! missed you o

      1. zikaolofin says:

        My dear. Demands & exigencies of work….hmmm. I’ve been ok sha

        1. topazo says:

          I am glad you are okay…please don’t stay away too long o…

          1. zikaolofin says:

            ok dear. Will try not to. It’s getting more and more challenging these days…..oh dear

            1. topazo says:

              The Lord is your strength o…

  4. Yemie says:

    I love this feel good poem Doc and it actually does taste nay, melts like ‘Sundae’, in my mouth! Vanilla flavoring of course, won’t have it any other way, nuh-uh! LOL

    Two dimensional I find this! When a day, that so happens to be on a Sunday, ends up also being a Sun Day! When the Sun’s out, and the rains and clouds are nowhere in sight! Pretty creative this is Doc, love the pun utilized here! Great thinking, sheer brill! Keep bringing it! Kudos! LOL

    1. topazo says:

      thanks Yemie… I love your brilliant analysis..

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