A story in 10 words!

This challenge is from theinkheart. To write a story in 10 words! Such a tall order… so here it is..



She stabbed her husband repeatedly while picturing her father’s face.



so, how was it? Comments please


20 Comments Add yours

  1. theinkheart says:

    Heavy with so much emotion.. pregnant with many thoughts like what could have triggered it and yet, it made sick sense… You killed it!!!

    1. topazo says:

      hmm..thanks! I am glad you liked it….

  2. Yemie says:

    Wowzer! This is quite compelling, intense! Short, concise, precise and complete in all ramifications! You’ve got a thing for shorts! And this is short and spicy, a very smashing hit! Wa gbayi jo, parolo Doki Oloye! LOL

    1. topazo says:

      I am blushing!!!

  3. Haha! Amazing. Said so much with words so few. Nice work.

  4. Walt Shakes says:

    Wow! Such a wealth of stories told right there. The past, the present, and the possible future.

    I should try this and see.

    1. topazo says:

      you should o
      I can’t wait to see what you write….it will be classic…

      1. Walt Shakes says:

        Abegi! Lol. You finished work here.

        1. topazo says:

          And I’m sure you can do better…

  5. Ermmm… *scratches head*

    1. topazo says:

      speak your mind dear….

  6. moses says:

    hmm wow,unbelievable reality,reality itself flowin,i felt d pain,d tears nd couse of a noble action in unnoble end,,,,,kudos baba

  7. Wow. I should absolutely try this.

    1. topazo says:

      Yes, you should..

  8. TM says:

    Amazing. Not sure I can do it

    1. topazo says:

      you could totally do it! I am sure of that…you wanna give it a try?

  9. Adeleke Julianah says:

    U sure knw hw to string Words…this is ‘Abinibi (Born to Write) not ability…

    1. topazo says:

      thanks for the vote of confidence….It means a lot…

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