Running Wild

Running into the light

Away from the dark night

Away from the realm of fright;

A place where shadows are a blight

And where all things are bright;

Where beauty is the heart’s delight

And where ugliness in its slight

Cannot be found; there is no fight

Nor pain, no panic nor the sleight

Of hand that fate tricks the sight

With. Climbing upwards to a height

Far above limitations; taking flight

And soaring, wild and free.

 

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23 Comments Add yours

  1. Very nice, the last word rhyme scheme, I would assume like most things is more difficult than it initially appears. I love this.

    1. topazo says:

      Thanks Dom. Yes it is difficult…thanks for dropping a comment, I really appreciate

  2. Yemie says:

    Yay!

    Happy days are here again, nay

    Happier days are here to stay

    Gloomie’s soooo far away

    And I hope he’ll never come out to play

    He needs to just remain at bay

    That’s all I gotta say

    By the way

    Do have you a very lovely day

    So Doc, how did I do?! Did I bring it??? LMAO!

    Awesomeness becomes you, all the time! I adore this happy dappy poem! Well done! *laughing*

    1. topazo says:

      You gats flow ma’am….
      Thanks aplenty

    2. zikaolofin says:

      This is beautiful Yemie. If I don’t see something on oluwaballer.wordpress.com by tomorroe, i’ll assume this to be your first. Nice one. Well done.

      1. Yemie says:

        Oh no! Not you again Zee dearest! Have a heart sweetie babes, please?! *puppy eyes* LOL

      2. topazo says:

        Zee, I swear you read my mind! We are really good partners!

        1. Yemie says:

          I’ll bet! Partners in crime! *tongue out* LMAO!

          1. topazo says:

            partners in progress….

  3. St Naija says:

    Cool. I would like you to try this again sans the rhyme, to see how it reads.
    Thank you for writing and sharing this.

    1. topazo says:

      Thanks St Naija, I will give it a try…

  4. zikaolofin says:

    Topazo, this is a beautiful piece. Rhyming scheme looks easy but must have taken some hard work and thinking

    1. topazo says:

      Rhyming is never that easy…and sometimes trying for a rhyme stifles the flow..

  5. theinkheart says:

    Is it just me or this is a poem for the afterlife?

    1. topazo says:

      Nice perspective… the beauty of poetry is the different dimensions to it…

  6. *clears throat*

    I’d really like to mime

    Even if it’s just for the briefest of time

    Erm… okay, you win, it doesn’t even rhyme

    Time to go, I hope it’s worth a dime

    Nice one Doc, this is sublime!

    1. topazo says:

      Bravo Senor!
      you just take style take dazzle…keep shining on jor…
      I am always glad to see you here.
      you do know about Yemie’s blog abi?

    2. Yemie says:

      *applauding* Now this right here’s worth more than several dimes! You’ve gat mad flows Joe, and like I always say; you’ve got it going like WHOA! Nice one, real nice! LMAO

  7. Thanks chief!

    Considering her depth and fluidity, she definitely has a blogger in her. Please come closer let me whisper in your ear:

    I think you, Zika and all others involved in this did what’s right and great. See ehn, if someone won’t budge, she should be nudged… or pushed.

    Yemie don’t mind them jare, you should sue somebody… but you will not deal with me personally, no? 🙂

    Just saying, straight from the heart 😉

    1. topazo says:

      walahi, take high five!!! you too much

    2. Yemie says:

      Senor Joe!!! My godbaby, I see you! And just when I thought I had this all figured out and thinking too that there’s at least a slight chance that you’re on my side; you go and do this??? Way to go, no worries! I know what I’d do ’bout you! You just wait, watch and see! Its on! Hmph! LOL

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