The Car



The car danced rhythmically

On the silvery road

Huffing and puffing

And grunting

As it struggled along

The uphill path.


4 Comments Add yours

  1. Yemie says:

    The ‘baby’ illustrated here looks wayyy too sleeky than rickety to be huffing, puffing and grunting but seeing as its saddled with the uphill task of ascending a steep slope, that’s understandable. *laughing*

    Doc, I adore this poem. Its refreshingly different and hilarious too. Especially loved how you described the car as dancing rhythmically. Well done, Sir; keep it coming!

    1. topazo says:

      I see you are in love with the ‘baby’ already….

      1. Yemie says:

        I love sleeky rides but ranges will do just fine, especially with the manner of roads we have in Naija. A range will be smooth in its ascent unlike the car illustrated here. Lolz

        1. topazo says:

          cool…you know how to flex

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