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This post is about trying new things and pushing my limits. The challenge was to write a story in exactly 50 words! How can you write a story in 50 words?! Well, I did give it a try and here it is.

your comments and feedbacks are highly appreciated.

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I sat stiffly on the sofa and stared at the TV not seeing anything, desire raged within me. I resolved to count to fifty before making my move.

She smiled up at me then and placed her head on my shoulders.

I was late.

Her soft snoring punctuated my countdown.

 

DP Challenge : Fifty

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42 Comments Add yours

  1. I love this! Well done..

    1. topazo says:

      thanks stargazer

      1. You are very welcome!

  2. Yemie says:

    I actually counted the words physically to be sure you weren’t pulling a fast one and imagine my surprise?! *laughing*.

    Wow! Besides getting fifty words exactly, the writing itself makes a whole lotta sense. Double thumbs up Doc, you nailed it absolutely!

    1. topazo says:

      thanks ma’am!

  3. I counted the words too, lol. This is really good. Funnily enough it is very similar to a haiku that I wrote 2 days ago and I’m just about to post on my blog! Great minds think alike. 🙂

    1. topazo says:

      you did? lol
      I am waiting to read what you wrote…
      yeah, we do….*smile*

  4. Oops, I actually posted it yesterday lol. I’m not well today, that’s my excuse anyway. 🙂

    1. topazo says:

      alrighty…I am off to go read it..

      hope you are feeling better?

      1. Much better today, thank you.

  5. Walt Shakes says:

    A new blog look and a 50-word story challenge. Nice one, doc.

  6. Zulaiha Muhammed says:

    Temi, I actually counted d words and u beat d mark wit a meaninful and stylish story…thumbs up!!!

  7. blogging says:

    Great info. Lucky me I came across your blog by accident (stumbleupon).
    I’ve book marked it for later!

    1. topazo says:

      thanks! I hope you stick around…I will love that very much

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