Forlorn

Eyes
Misty
Glassy
Foggy

Tears
Trickling in
Slow motions
Cascading
Trailing new paths
Downwards

Heart
Spluttering
Stopping
Picking up
Laboring
Sweating
Via the eyes

Waves
Of pain
Billows
Crashing
Overwhelming
Submerging

Gasps
Of breath
Caught in mid air
Halting

Sighs
Chest constricted
In agony
Heart bleeding
In tears of
Love lost

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6 Comments Add yours

  1. heartbreakingly lovely.

    I’d add a few spaces between the lines to break it up to make it even more powerful.

    1. topazo says:

      Thanks for the suggestion, I will do that

  2. Yemie says:

    Chai Topazo! Se won fi heartbreak se e ni, abi e ma gba mi eyin ara adugbo ke? Na who do you this kain thing na? You’re in dire need of deliverance o .ROTFLMAO!

    All these your heartbreak poems, you do them so damn well and now you’re REALLY beginning to creep me out. Se ko re ota re o? Abi should I be concerned? This is one heartbreak poem too many.

    1. topazo says:

      hehehehehehehe….like you said I am a heartbreak specialist.

      and yes, I have listened to sound sultan….didn’t see any earthquake or volcanic eruption…and my life is still the old boring one…

      1. Yemie says:

        Ok. Next and final stop, MFM; for MAJOR deliverance. If dat one no work, O.Y.O for you be dat o. *singing*. Eyi ga lagaju, eyi ga! LMAO!

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